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どうも、キャラクターを魅力的に描いてみせる術には長けていても、彼らを使って物語るという点においてはもう一歩。いや、うぃんどみるに素晴らしいストーリーを期待してはだめだという声も聞こえてきそうですが、やりようによってはもう一段上の完成度に達したのではないかなという気もするのですね。

お話はなんだか赤面するような展開に戸惑いましたが、何はともあれ大団円のラストシーンに拍手喝采。彼ら彼女らに幸あれ!!

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