読了。
前巻に比べてずいぶんと読みやすくなったような……。
でも、相変わらず登場人物たちの吐く大言には慣れませんね。この辺は作者氏のもともとの土俵が影響してるのかもなぁ。あまりライトノベルで見かけるような文体ではないような気がします。
それにしても、前巻から何エピソードかすっ飛ばしたようなキャラクターの変容ぶりが意外といえば意外ですね。主人公として主観で語らせるには少々特殊すぎた誠人から萌恵サマ主観の文章に変わって、相変わらず彼女の語尾は変ですが、テンポ良く読めるようになっています。性格変わってるけど(笑)
黄昏と副題に付いているから、完結させるつもりで書いていたのかと思ったら、思い切り次巻に続いてますね。敵も味方も駒は出そろっているようなので、あとは広げた風呂敷をたたむだけでしょうね。
相変わらず脳に関係する学術用語が乱舞してますが、その辺はノリでスルーするのが良いのでしょうね。深く考えてしまうといろいろツッコミどころがありそうな予感がしますし(^^;
読了。
う〜ん、う〜ん、う〜ん。前巻から気になってる前半の日常から後半の戦闘への切り替わりが唐突すぎてとってつけたような印象がなくならないですね。それとあからさまに校正ミス的な違和感のある描写が気になります。
「運命の鎖よ!!」 はかなげな少女の声がして、直後、一筋の鎖がヴィーゴの身体を背中から腹へと貫いた。 「グッ……!!」「どうして!?」 ヴィーゴの苦悶と、ユージェニーの驚きが、同時に鎖の先にいる少女──鈴蘭を見る。 鎖はヴィーゴの右腕を貫通していた。 ^^^^^^^^
……( ゜Д゜)ポカーン 最後の一文の対象は「鈴蘭」でないとおかしい気がするのですが。というか、この戦闘描写の底の浅さと恥ずかしい台詞は慣れないですね。もともと作品の方向性がこのような構成を必要としているのかもしれませんが、迫力のある戦闘描写というのは一朝一夕にはいかないものですかね。
だんだんと鼓太郎の鈍感さ加減にもいらいらしてきましたし、ヒロインの祈梨も影が薄くなっていってるし(^^; 次巻で一区切り付くとのことですが、バトルはいいから、もっとラブをラブ分を盛り込んでくださいな!
デビュー作のこんねこは個人的には微妙なをしていましたが、やはり絵がかわいいので体験版はプレーせねばなるまいて。
にしても400MB超のファイルはADSLでは時間がかかります。ダウンロード完了までもうしばらくかかるなぁ……。
で、プレーしてみた。うわぁ、前作から変わってないぞー。というか主人公の左手の痣って……令呪にしかみえない(笑) こんねこのときもそうだったけれども、シリアスを組み込むための物語の枠組みの構築が上手くいかないと、唐突すぎて置いてけぼりなのですよ。体験版ということで日常のエピソードのいくつかが省略されてるのかもしれませんが、前作からの成長の跡が見られないのは残念かな。
でも、絵と主題歌のためだけに買ってしまいそうだ。榊原ゆいの歌はいいねぇ。最近のお気に入りです。
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